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Fading Soul

  • Other Poetry Re: me, myself and I

    I really like this poem. You did a good job writing it. Keep writing

    Sep 11, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Hello

    This poem was kinda odd but it was good

    Sep 11, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Him

    This is a really good poem. I can relate to what u wrote about. Good job on writing it... My opinion is its great the way it is.

    Sep 1, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Poison (need a new title)

    This is a really good poem. I can relate to this poem, & I love how u wrote it out. great work

    Sep 1, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Pain gained, Love lost

    The love I lost .... Never felt as bad as .... The pain I gained.... From losing you. .... The feeling of a knife .... Corseting my skin.... As the ...

    Sep 1, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Water

    This poem is cool, It's really interesting poem & I love how you write about water in different ways

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: love

    I really like this poem...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: ~*~Darkend Light~*~

    I am that lamp in the corner that you always leave on. Untill I burn out or die... I once was so bright, brought light into a darkend room. But ...

    Aug 28, 2009


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
— SunsetTree